nice job! i like it a lot, it really describes our history. if you get a chance can you cheak out mine some time? thanks. i give your poem a 5/5! it was awesome, keep it up! have a nice day ^_^

Yet another wonderfuel write...you have outdone yourself on this one..it was remarkable and so very very true. 5/5

I love this poem, it is very deep and excellently written, and it has very good rhymes and descriptions.
I like the topic that you picked, too.
5/5 from me

Great job! i loved the topic and the message. it was very deep and showed your feelings on this subject! keep up the great work :o]

Really interesting poem unusual layout but it worked well to suit the topic xxx alex xxx

This is a good one... i love the topic ... glad someone took the time to write about something like this... descriptions were good and the flow was too..

you did a good job on this one.5/5

I love the way you ended this piece for it so true but you made it sound so simple, i like reading poems like this b/c its gets people to actually think and i think you have a great style of writing keep it up -
raindrops 5/5