Aww Kumar this was so sweet! I especially liked the way that you described your "someone" as your star.. I think that was so adorable! =) Great job! Take care.. see ya!

Wow, that's really sweet. I love it, great job. ;)

Looks like you love the beauty in the stars. I love your metarphoring your subject. Beautiful.

WOW! Kumar, You're a romantic at heart. Beautiful and so sweet. Great job, my friend. Enjoy your writing so much. lol

Hi kumar...Great love poem....Ilike it

i love the way u compare ure love to the stars and so convincingly prove shes the real star!! great one :-)

Once again I bow to your greatness I enjoyed this poem a lot. U got massive talent her man you quit this site im not coming back again.

Great job Kumar. Great job on the poem. Keep it up. Thanks for the comments on mine. I'll have to keep up with yours. :)

Ashley

a beautiful awesome love poem5 >>>>>>>

aww... it's so sweet! it's really a beautiful piece any girl would beg for. i loved it lots! thanks for the comments- appreciate it. take care:)