Lost Sight

by Seth   Nov 30, 2004


I used to be like you,
not a care in the world,
then it was broken,
it all came unfurled.

So I kept on trying,
trying in vain,
I could've just stopped,
and halted the pain.

But I was blinded,
by the light,
now I am gifted,
with no more sight.

I no longer see passion,
care or concern,
I no longer wish it,
for I have learned.

That with love comes hate,
and all in between,
the sight is gone,
know what I mean?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Joyce Duboise

    great poem,i feel what you are feeling when i read this

  • 19 years ago

    by Lauren

    lol just realized i comment on here 2 times lol well take it as a double compliment!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lauren

    loved it...awesome wording and it flowed very nicely. i also enjoyed how you described it..i could picture myself feeling what you felt..keep writing!
    -xoxo-
    Lauren

  • 19 years ago

    by chelsea

    good job seth,I think everyone knows what you mean because we probably have all felt it or are feeling it right now.Keep up the great work, you always seem to surprise me with what you come up with.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lauren

    very unique! loved every minute! keep writing!
    xoxo
    Lauren

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