great poem...just keep your head up tho...you'll make it

Awesome poem, I liked the style. Take care and keep writing.

if you dont want to make it you wont andrea.....sweety i know its hard but you gotta keep your head up....ok?

powerful poem...another well written work. good job, and keep it up

Your wording is very unique. Good job! *heather

lol! people stare at me weird all the time! thanxs for your comment! Great Poem! I love it! this is really amazing I love how it shows the progress of you leaveing and then you're gone! great job! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

this is a great poem, keep it up! take care and stay strong

good work

i love this poem,
and i love your work. great job, you showed your emotion really well in this poem 5/5
>>puts you in my favourites

Good poem it is sad in a way and thanks for the comment!

take care