Why don tyou just admit your sad, it helps!!
keep wrting
kt xx

very nice poem.. i admire u.. :D..

Keep your head up and know you are not alone. Thanks for sharing. Fell free to read my poem All of Me are The Clock.

Artificial happiness, such a clever way 2 describe it!! 5/5

Thank you!!! :D

I really liked it!

Thats really good i can relate alot to this poem keep it up

I can relate to this ALOT

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HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHA ur last :P

Its a wonderful poem and im sure most can relate.. *5*
-Kristen

Well done i really like this poem. i love the name as well. as someone else said its a great way to describe it =)

Hi your poem is fantastic it made me cry :s .. cuz i live the same... i try to put my fake smile in my face .. and im regret that now cuz no one deserve it :( thnx for sharing feelings :)

Wow...amazing poem, well done.
You've captured so well how many of us feel, and I think nearly everyone will be able to relate to it in some way.

This poem was beautifully written im sure everybody captured ur emotion,keep writen ~makenzie~

I really liked your poem, i think that everyone feels this way at a point of time.
loved it.

Good poem