that was a relli great poem! i just hope it's not based on truth... anyway, keep writing! :)

brilliant poem, very touching but so sad. :'(........ keep up the great work, and stay strong.

take care, lu -x-x-x-x-

Hey Polly,

Good poem, but you do know that there are ppl out there that can help you.

Hope you get the help you need

Tim

nice poem! hope its not a true poem... if it is...then...poor u...! nice poem tho anewayz!

Great poem. 5/5 definatly, and it deserves every one of those stars. I hope to God this is not true. anyway great job and keep it up. Hold your head up high! Take care,
-Cheerfully Cynical-

so much pain, i went into tears! i have given it 5, you write very well, polly. so much heart touching poem!!!

wow thats a really great poem, its like u can feel whats happening while u read it, great job!!!

this poem is very honest and I hope everything works out for you. My dad is a deadbeat and I dont talk to him so I cant relate exactly but its amazing none the less. Keep it up

LOL I already commented on this poem! anyway, I'm happy to say that it is still a really sad and nicely written poem, even if I have already read it.

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that was really good but so sad, i really hope its not true but if it is im sorry, keep up the amazing work xxxx