very good poem, 5/5 , the rhymes work well

thanks for commenting!

Erica

very good poem, 5/5 , the rhymes work well

thanks for commenting!

Erica

sorry, didnt mean to post twice

I really liked this poem! Great Job! *5/5*... Best Of Luck!
*!*Angel Loving Sedusha*!*

OMG!!! omg..this poem is like sooooooooooo awesome...I luv it soo much..its so sad..and I could almost feel the pain..I could read this over and over again and it would never get old thats how good it its..lol keep writting u have such a great talent..this writting was excellent..please continue..I added u to my favorite list so I can check ur other poems out..keep it up!! Awesome job!!!
Shanney

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