Today

by Amber D.   Dec 6, 2004


I would greatly appreciate it if you would comment on my poem. You can even offer some words of advice. Thank you.

When I look
At you
I think
About how lucky
I am.
To be with
You is such
A wonderful
Thing.
Every day
I hope
That you
Will never leave me.
For there are
No more
Fish in the sea.
You are
My one and
Only.
Our love
Is the strongest
Type of love.
The kind that
Is sent from
The one above.
And every day
He receives
The thanks he
Deserves.
You are the
Only thing
That gives me the
Strength to
Go on
Each and every
Day.
Thank you
God, for the
Boy I have
TODAY!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Fireflower

    wow.. that was a great poem.. it sort of sounded natural and kind of floated. the wording was excelent! great job!

    vedali