i really like the variety of words u used in and the emotion i felt that u urself put into this poem. again, good job.loves.

excellent poem, i like these lines:

Life is the number one terminal disease.
Chronic and sick,
Why cure cancer?
Life will get to you sooner and faster.

so much meaning in so few words... great job! 5/5!

Hey, I really liked this poem of yours. I've been working on a couple of deep poems myself, but I can't ever get them to come across the way I want. I admire how you can write so many great poems that are full of meaning.

The poem is great as usual. You asked if other people saw or had something you don't and I'm going out on a limb here (feel free to correct me if I'm wrong) but what some ppl have is faith. But from my experience if you think and/or question to much faith in God is hard to find. Although i have always felt that whatever helps get you through the day is great, wether it be faith in God, or nature or Allah, or other faiths like Hinduism, buhdism, etc. It doesn't really matter! You could have faith that the sun will rise and set if you want.. Anything that works to make this life we lead seem meaningful.

hey this poem remindes me of well me it's really good keep wrighting cuz i want to read more

i think when it comes to writing poems anything goes...your work is really good...~sherrie~