i cried... dont know why... prolly this poem really hit me, coz recently my friend died on me... and i really miss him... really miss my friend... hope u pass by mine... =) votes and comments much appreciated... much love... letishia

well, i've never read as decent a free verse as that, it flows really well and the language is clearly on the spur of the moment, loved it, take care and keep it up :)

emz x

i've only had one friend to die and the closeness of another dying...it hurts, it gets to you...i know but trust that your friends watch down on you in amazement for the person you are deep down inside!! anyhow...i feel like a repeat with you but great poem!!
<3 Heather