Inside My Mind

by Sarcastic Poet   Dec 8, 2004


I would just like to say i copied the 1st line from this person that had a quote.i hope that person doesn't mind.The rest is made by me;)

I try to smile and laugh
so that no one will find
whats really going on
Inside My Mind
Tears in My eyes and
rolling down my face
Their the kind only
you can erase
Flash Backs and Memories
Come into my brain
Go to my heart and cause
the worst the worst pain
You didn't know what
I felt when you two were
together
I wanted to vanish from
life for the better
I bet you didn't know bout
the nights i cried myself
to sleep
And tried to heal my heart
with the wound that was cut
so deep
Of course you wouldn't know
you dint even care
Can you look into my eyes
and tell me that its fair?
Don't even try cuz we both
no its not
But having you in my dreams
is the only thing that i got
And now that your not together
And all your attention is on me
The love i have for you, you will finally get to see

Plz Vote & Comment*if u comment on mine I will comment on urs;)

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  • 19 years ago

    by sarah jenkins

    I think its very good! you have a nice way of rhyming but if i had any suggestions, it would be to lengthen your sentences but thats just me, everyone has there own way of writting so just go with your flow! if you could, comment on "The Wonderful Place" because i feel that its the best one ive written, and i also am trying to find out what people think of it!

    Sarah Jenkins

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ruiz

    I LOVED IT!!! I'm going tru da same thing :,(