That was captivatingly beautiful. A wonderful poem to read. The first I've read of your work, yet I am already convinced of your talent.

wow-amazing-true talent. I love the dramatic imagery and creative metaphors. your words are beautiful and put together so powerfully.

"He’s brilliance pacing while she’s beholden, and still she’s helpless as habit whispers of her long depravity. Tired of this possibility suddenly now become creative in a once worshiped impracticality."

Though I especially admired this stance every word in this piece was as powerful as the next. This poem was absolutly incredible. fantastic job

Melancholic, sensual, lost. Another wonderful poem, Elizabeth!

I love this fantacy-style writing with old english tongue...it really gives a sense of age, and i haven't heard that in a while...great job!

Wow! Amazing work. Nice job:)

Very nicely done, bravo!!!

I believe you have talent after reading this poem. I love that it is unique and unlike the other poems. even though I didn't understand all the words, i think that is what makes it good. Not everybody has the ability to use higher vocabulary. 5/5 - keep up the good work.