Wow...that was a really really good poem! I hope it didn't really happen. If it did, i'm really sorry!
Love always
Sammy

Thank you for all of your comments!

WOW that poem is amazing !!! I LOVE it !! is it true ???? wow, briliant !!!!! Take care,
E.

WOW....so good....hope its not true.....you have serious talent well done

Thank you again for all your votes and comments. Love Emma xxx

Awe, I'm really sorry if that was a true story, I really liked it though, it flowed nicely. Keep it up. *tear*

everyone is asking if this poem is real is it because you havent answered it on here? is it??.. really good by the way!

Thank you again for all your votes and comments. Love Emma xxx

This is not a true poem, but I know what it is like to lose the person you love. I am not the only one who has lost someone they love. So this is a poem that is out there for everyone. Love Emma xxx

I liked this poem, i like the way it tells a story, and especially cuz it's a sad story. 5/5 for u!
~SatuzKa

that was soooo sad...you did a great job expressing emotion in this poem emma, definately a 5

wow that was a great poem, ur really talented, great job, please comment and rate mine

please tell me this really didin't happen. if it did i am so sorry.

wow really liked this poem had certin parts that i esecially liked altho i thought the flow of the sixth stanza was a little out of rhythm. but very good and sad story! well done!!! hope to recieve some comments bk lol
take care
xxxLoUxxx

wow such a great poem........ and i looked anxiously at the comments asking if it was true..and glad that it wasnt...... really emotional and powerful

take care