My deepest thoughts

by Delo   Dec 9, 2004


You're in my deepest thoughts,
You're so deep that you're not to find
I want to find you and have those nice feelings
Cause you're always on my mind.

You always make me feel better,
You can always heal my tears,
You always make me happier,
You're the only one that understands my fears

I need to find you now,
I can't live without your love,
My life is just going down
You are always In my thoughts of dove

Come back to me.
I thought we were as sturdy as a tree.

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  • 18 years ago

    by I.Lose.It.All

    Wow delo again im.... wow speechless

  • 18 years ago

    by kate

    Wow dude seroiusly got its deep thou but i love it keep up the writting u have a talnet

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    I dont think its supposed to be funny....but the last part about the tree......sorry apart from the end i think its beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    It was good! a few parts were..ehh but it was good overall! it flowed nicely so thats a bonus! the emotion was there too! so a 5/5!! good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by lindzy

    ur word choice is so interesting in this one, i still love it tho! good job yet again!
    5/5
    ~*lindz*~

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