Omg. I freaking LOVE IT!!!! way to go Krys and I'm soooooo sorry he broke your heart. But sum guyz are just scum, never let a guy bring you down live everyday in happiness not depression just because some jackass played with your heart *hugz* keep up the good work!
CrypticTears

Nice ^.-

Except for being a bit long, i thought this poem was pretty good. I liked the idea too, cuz it was very original. Yeah, i wish i could rewind some things too. Good job, keep on writing, ill give you 4 :)
SatuzKa

I wish I could rewind but it doesn't work that way another exellent poem. Sorry I have found myself reading them all. I like ur work!