dont be embarrassed...i love it. so sad though...but beautiful.

alwayz,
*autumn*

..its an amazing poem. really. keep up the good work. you have a mad amount of talent.
lots of love,
~Krystle~

Katie...Its not horrible!!I love it!! I could have written this poem about me!! I think I've told you about it...but i'm not sure!! I know you can bounce back katie, i know you're strong enough!!! Keep going sweetie, Keep going!!
love you
Sammy

I Absoulely LOVED Your Peom.. I Hope That Has Never Happened To You... It Has To me.. It GOing ON Right Now And I Have NO CLue How To Stop It.. But I Loved It Keep Writing

Hey this is beautiful....it sums up how one behaves when one is madly in love, unreciprocated love I mean.

This wasn't horrible at all!!! I thought it was sooo awesome!! Everything was worded so perfect! Don't be embarassed about this poem at all, its really a piece of art! amazing job, once again!!!!
Good luck with everything!

As always, great job...

This is a really really good poem..I like it a lot...