Awww that's so beautiful it makes me want to cry!! It's so sad and good!!!
I really hope it isn't true and if it is I'm sooo sorry and if you need someone I'm here!
Love
xoxox

awesome poem, great job! wow! 5/5!
Of course I don't mind, I'd add you but I already did... very good!

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Excellent poem...I absolutle love this. Such deep pain and suffering. I love how you remark to your mother twice: "My life's now a lonely thing mother."

A truly awesome piece. 5/5

What a great poem...I loved it. It is soo sad and expresses your feelings so good.
And thank you for your comments on my poems. They really meant a lot to me.....Thank you.

awesome poem, thanks for the review and sorry i havent posted many new poems, if you read my profile-thing it kind of explains why, but i appreciate it... thanks anyways... i really like the last stanza, nice word choice... great work

awesome. I really loved the way you
wrote thim poem. you're really really
talented. keep it up.
love you,
marjan

Lots of emotion
i think it is beautiful (whih is odd coming from me cause i don't say beautiful) in other words 5/5