Sad, but good. Good job Kumar.

[I'd comment more, but I have to go.]

5/5 God Bless!

Awwwww.... I don't want your paindful soul to be set free... though.. when i say that it sounds like i want you to be in pain... Which isn't true... but i'm sure you understood what i wrote... This was an excellent poem... Though, it was very sad... Also, your last comment you gave me about confusion set.... I think it was great.... lol I laughed when i read it... Thank you.... Trust me... If you wrote the same thing i would of said what you said.... :-p .... hehe though... Just to set the record straight (i use that term loosly mind you lol) I still like men more than women... :-D ANYWAYS... Take Care... Great Poem
Angel

Great job Kumar. Keep up the good work.

Ashley

sad but nice!! :-)

Omg... I never really read a poem quite like this one... mostly the poems I've read are by authors that are females. This is a very touching poem.. sad and all... I like your writing... ;) good job..

Take care

CyN*

This is great! have really been thr' a heartbreak???i hope not cos i've been thr' it i know it pains a lot!! well grt writing! go on...

aww really sad..
but great poem again
keep writing and smiling=)
bye²
take care
~~5~~
MeL

fabulous! lovely and heart-felt! keep it up.....