Comments : Please, Divinity...

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I need his affectionate touch, to maintain my breath
    And his every word, to keep my spirit bright

    Don’t spoil my bliss to further extent
    Just keep him here in my presence

    those two stanza's really seemed to jump out at me when i read the poem. it was well thought out and it seems that it was definately encouraged by something in your real life..everything works out for the best...but sometimes the best is the worst at the time.

  • 19 years ago

    by tormented

    Hey Merrily this is an awsome poem. I mean wow. And im your friend how come u neva mention me:( lol. il call u tonight

  • 19 years ago

    by Sw33ti3

    That was pretty good..keep it up cuz u got lots of talent...latez
    *XoX Sw33ti3*

  • 19 years ago

    by tormented

    Merrily me and mom got into a fight, and now my pants moved to michigan. call me for info, you probably think im crazy
    ashley

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    excellent poem!!!