WOW i really like it!! Great Job!

WoW!

This truly is quite the awesome piece. I found it entirely delectible and domineering. Fantastically written. Such a great story, and the last stanza is something truly to adore, and embelish in....Hehe...I hope theres a part 2.

Merry Christmas. 5/5

True story??? I would say a boyfriend that can be stolen is not worth keeping ;) ...somehow I guessed the ending of the poem as I was reading it... its a sad world.. oh well, great write, keep up the good work okay :) Take care.

LOL. It's only half true...like for instance, I didn't really introduce her to him...or have a party...or...ok, well let's just say the truth has been streched A LOT. LOL. It's a good thing I got away from him anyway so I don't really feel as bad as I did. Staying with him would have been a very bad move, and I see that now. I just use that experience I had in my life to write most of my poems because, that's the most I've ever been hurt and the most I've ever been in love so, it's easier to write down on paper everything I felt. And you're right. A boyfriend that can be stolen is not worth keeping. I just have to keep reminding myself that whenever I get nostalgic.