not bad. keep it up. some things could be worded better, but its a good poem overall.

5/5..great job. i really liked it.

much love
Shannon

gr8 poem.. nice rhyme and gud use of words.. a times, the flow wasnt so gr8, but other than that, it was deep.. thnx 4 writing.. keep it up
tc
nouna
plz check out sm of mine.. especiallt those unrated n uncommented if u got the time.. thnx a bunch anywayz

great job. Thx for commenting on my poem. I liked your alot. many people feel the same way as what you said in the poem. It's very well written. Keep it up!

That was so sad! 5/5

This was a sad poem, I hope everything is going better for you now

WOOOOAH!!! Wow!!! Very well expressed. Your poem has a lot of meaningful words to it. I cannot thank you enough for sharing!!! :o) I wish I could write as well as you do!!

((((((Big Hugs))))))

5/5!!!!

Michelle

It was really good.

WOOO ur da best i wna b able 2 write like u love u emzy xxx