Comments : Run away

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow, great poem you've written =)
    5 stars for this one.. Please check out my poems...I would mean so much to me! Take Care from September

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Well done, I enjoyed it, check out mine if you get the chance, I dunno whete=her ive commented on this before

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very well put u did an exellent job on this poem. If u would check out some of mine Thanx!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    This is a great one.. I voted a 5..
    Please check out my poem "My Dad: Dead and gone forever" and "the final cut for marc" and please comment and vote it would mean a lot to me.. thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    wow that was amazing well done

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    that part when poeple arnt there for u ..that i can relate to most of the poem...but dont hate urself if people treat u like dirt thats their porblem not urs ...rise above it

    oh and by the way great poem ! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ericka

    It's A Good Poem. Great Job At Expressing Your Feeling. 5/5 Ericka

  • 19 years ago

    by L0KA

    Hey I liked ur poem a lot! I feel da same way sometimes. Ur a good writer. I look forward to reading more of ur poems. Nice job. 5/5 =)

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    This is really good...i may never get there
    i may never see
    how it feels
    to like the person staring back at me
    This is my faviorte part...

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow what a great poem... very good job =) 5 for this one... Please check out my poems "You cheated in a cheap hotel" and "the silver moon sparkling" thanks, hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Wow, that's just how I feel, so I know what you are going through!!! It's a very good poem, keep up the good work.....It deserves a big 5...

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    This poem definitly had some good stuff in it, liked the way it was written too! Keep on writing, take care.
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by Selfrejected

    kick ass...poem most people have summed it up already...so...4/5

  • 19 years ago

    by lifes big mistake

    this si really nice its the a poem i tried to write called mirrrors mayb u can check it out? take care and well done xx

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Great poem hun. A lot of emotion. I know how you feel. I feel the same way at time. Great job, keep it up!

    Love,
    Tiff

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow very good... very well-written.. I voted a 5 for this one! please check out my poems "eternal sunshine of the spotless mind" and "My dad: dead and gone forever" thanks a lot.. ((please vote and comment))

  • 19 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    This was really great. You really did a great job there. The poem was well written and it flows very well. And it is very sad =( Still Great Work!!! 5/5 =)

    Could you comment on my new poem titled My Story Part II thanks I really appreciate it..=)

  • 19 years ago

    by David Paul

    Wow. good poem. It sucks if thats how you really feel but over all its a really good poem. there were a couple words in there that don't really belong (shit). Good job though. Never give up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel E F Allen

    I think that this is a good piece but I worry if it is auto biographical that you would feel like you can run away from being yourself. I hope that instead of running you can look at yourself and see a person who shows a tremendous amount of potential in her writing and if that comes from your inside then your inside is beautiful. Just a word from a concerned stranger. Take care xx

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    thats sad but really good, keep it up