If you only knew

by brandy   Dec 19, 2004


Every minute that I’m awake
I catch myself thinking of you
I don’t know how much I can take
Of the lonely days I go through

Every night when I’m asleep
I always dream of you
All of them I choose to keep
Even the ones that prove untrue

Every day that goes by
I remember the night I spent with you
All I can do is sigh
As I think of what we didn’t do

Every week that passes
I wish that I were with you
Because when I was with you I fell fast
And I wonder if you did too

A month has already gone
Since the first time I kissed you
We’ve had such a weird bond
From any point of view

Hopefully a year won’t elapse
Without me seeing you
I know I will break and collapse
If you only knew

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gerard Kurt

    really good. The rhyme is excellent. Keep it up.

    Its a 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    acurate and deep image of what love is like..i really liked how you put everything into context. I enjoyed the poem and it was one of my favorites.

    I loved it.

    Five/Five

    P.S. thank you for your comment anything that goes on that poem is really appreciated and i will write back to everyone who comments on my poem. i know not all gals are like her...just the ones that i seem to meet, maybe it is something a matter with me...maybe i am too nice or something....but i don't like to hurt the ones i love.

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