a heart felt poem.....lovely and beautiful!!!!! keep it up.

i enjoyed this poem it helped me to understand the mystery of the pain of desire. i loved the metahors which were inspired by events. i like your style 5>>>

Its not silly at all, its a wonderful poem

I like it. It has some silly aspects, but it's well written.

Excellent Job well done.

God Bless

5/5

awww..thats not silly at all!!
thats beautiful!
i really like it! keep it up!!
take care
MeL

its not at all silly,its a great poem...beautifully written and it flowed really well :-)

Excellent job, Kumer. Not stilly at all. Keep it up and take care! =)

Tell me one thing... is there a someone really special for whom you are writing all these wonderful things? cuz she seems to be one hell of an inspiration.. now i know why i added you in my favorites, keep it up!

Everyday i water the plant with my tears,
for every tear a beautiful rose appears,
you say these roses belongs only to you,
what about my tears,on which roses grew.
my fav lines.well thought.a very fine poem.5