I liked the message that you sent across and the story of a relationship that wasnt whaet it seemed. I also really liked the last stance,
"So as I move on
Eyes wide open and all
I can hold my head up
And finally walk tall"
Especially the last two lines, I liked that you showed recovery after pain. good job

OH my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Maybeth you have no idea how much I loved this poem..I don't know what it was but something about this peice just seriously gave me the chills!! Especially the last line..you are so very talented and just like you said I'm sure you will walk tall and keep your head up about the whole situation! Your great Maybeth it's always a pleasure reading your work! Love always,
~Chelsey~

beautiful poem once again...great write...keep them coming...take care and Happy Christmas...FIVE>>>

Very nice job, I enjoyed it greatly. You are good at typing for a 99 year old.. hahah.. well anywho good jod, you're a great poet. Keep up the great work.

i am so sorry i dont check out ur poems as often as i would like...but i need to u got some serious talent...God bless you hun and if u dont mind would u go to my site and leave me a comment in the guestbook as well? thanks..
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Hey this was a great poem. I like it, as i read it i felt the betrayal in the relationship, the lies and the blindness of love. But at the end when sight is gained u escape the lie. I really like this all the way.