Very touching poem, I undearstand what it is like to lose someone......thank you very much for commenting on my poems.......Your comments confused me though, one minute you seemed to be complementing me, and then the next it seemed you were calling me a poser.....I just don't understand.......either way, the comments were appreciated.....

Kalika

I love it! great job on this one =]

Wow man, that was really nice. you showed the pain very well, but in a sort of optimistic way, very cool.

Well written & beautifully penned 5/5 ... amazing !

This poem is touching. i have lost a friend too and its not a great feeling .. i am so sorry you have to go through this though loves. may your friend rest in peace

Thats really good. im sorry you lost someone.