Comments : Come Closer, Come In

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    dang girl this is friggen awesome.....pssh umm i am friggen speechless thanx a lot..lol

    God bless
    love heather craig

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    I've honestly never read anything like this.
    The read was as rapid as I've heard speak of.
    Excellent suspense throughout. (5)

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure


    I totally didn't understand, and I think that's why I liked it so much. It was a brilliant poem ... [as has been stated before] ... I really liked the style of it, and the repetition. Excellent job. Definate, well deserved 5.

  • 19 years ago

    by paperdoll

    It took me a few moments to catch a hold of the rhyming patterns but by merely saying it aloud you can tell what a great rhythm this poem has to it. I like the short, sharp punch of each phrase and the fear inspired by it.

    Great work, I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

    -paperdoll

  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    Hey i really liked that.. It was written well and the style was awesome!! great job.. bye bye EJ