W/o you :[ just isn't right

by Alison   Dec 24, 2004


It hit me,
what we always had was going to no longer be,

it'S like you got inside of me and took e-thing back you owned,
it's been several months and neither of us have phoned

it's like what we had doesn exist,
and you kno you're the only thing on my Christmas list

i just wanted that one nite together for you to tell me we would be friends forever,

but i don't think my wish is coming true,
but i have to tell you im nothin w/o you,

you gave me the strength to get up each day,
and you gave me the warmth, to assure me that you wanted me to stay,

but you threw all of that out the door,
and when that happened i hit the floor,

it's like you had control of me,
but you don't anymore and now i cant see.

i don't know what made you go away,
i think about it every day,

i'm still TRYING to get over you,
but i think it's going to take more than a FEW,

i just want to know why you went away, and why you couldn't just stay.

everything reminds me of you still,
everything does and always will,

i love yer personality,
but i guess it's time that i come to actuallity,

i moved to washington,
so i guess that's why you said i'm done.

if we ever really did have something? which i don't think we did, it was fake as fake as it will ever get,

not being w/ u just isn't right,
and i can't even sleep through the whole nite.

i loved you and still do,
but i don't know what to do w/o you :[

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  • 19 years ago

    by sarah jenkins

    Okay, Okay, i get it! The reason why i put the things in my poem, about the older guy, was because, thats how we met, i'd been going through a hard time and then tried to forget about it, and when ever i was down the most, there mike was, picking me back up off my feet, and he's really the only way i ever got through the whole thing, because its a horrible horrible thing to go through, and it just makes me so mad that guys will do this to young young girls, and right now theres this girl asking me questions about it, and shes 13 years old, dating someone 19, and she thinks he loves her, and ive tried to tell her whats going to happen, and she wont listne, cause he said he loved her, and that he'd wait for her, and i think deep down she knows its a lie, but right now she believes him, now can you imagine that! at the age of 13 you should be alot smarter than that, am i right?!

  • 19 years ago

    by sarah jenkins

    Alison,

    This is a wonderful poem! but what i was really wondering about, is why on my poem "How we met" your were confused? About what happend? just write me back on my comment box on that poem, and ill get it later!

  • 19 years ago

    by ~iloveantz~

    hay! fanx 4 commenting!!! aw thats a wiked poem i no exactly hoW u feel i went out with my bf 4 2 years and once i moved i never heard from him again ='( i no how hard it is i hate it where i am now but i hope 4 both of us it gets better!!!! XXX <3 MWAH!

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