Wow that was amazing.

Amazing write hun...deep and sad...I hope you feel better soon =(...I love you girl...hope to talk to you soon <33 smile and keep your head up, don't go dancing....<3 xxxxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

ooooooo sweetie... im so sorry. please stop trying to help others and help yourself instead. great job on the poem but its so sad. just talk to me.... spill out anything you need to please. dont cover up!!!!! im so so so sorry. love ya
~cort~

this is a great poem. but if u eva need to talk about anything im here for u ok. Just page me. lol. Take care and stay strong.
Emily

it's beauiful! good job

thats my sweet melody

It's an excellent poem, and very well written. You can really feel the pain in the verses, and it seems really true to life. if u have time, vote or comment on some of mine, they're not especially dark, but you might like them, lol, thx.

beautiful poem, yet again. what you write should never cease to amaze me. im adding you to my favorite members!

Beatifully written, keep up the great work xxx