yea, i agree, society is so damn screwed up! i mean what is this world coming to and what is in the years to come? anyway, i love your poem, your truely talented! Merry Christmas! o<=] (haha thats my santa smiley)^_^
take care!^^
-Michelle

thanks 4 the comments,they really are apreciated,and this christmas,all i want to recieve is a big hug.*hugs*i think everyone has forgotten the true meaning of christmas.everyone is in a rush and all,i hate it.all i really want is to see my love,know he's staying in edmonton,and know he loves me too.
~a friend at wits end

nice poetic flow pointing out some real problems