GREAT rhyme flow...this is seriously good stuff. keep it up!

hey great poem i really liked it keep it up and please comment it on mine if you have time keep it up -xcxkrystal

Awesome!! Sad though! It's sucks when people break your trust. Anyway great poem.....happy holidays

all i can say is WOW! this poem is really amazing, well written keep up the great work u have such a great talent!
xoxo
Paulette

this was...wow!! LOVED IT!!