Enjoyed and I'll keep reading. Great job. lol

hey this was a great peom. good work.

I really like your poem. who is it for. keep your head up. you'll find the right girl for you. someday.

Utterly wonderful and the most beautiful poem I've red for some time, I cried when I read it. It reached deep inside me. Thank you.

hey

thats a great poem sorry about that.check out mine sum time.

this is an incredibly beautiful poem. i love the end stanza!! 5/5

do you think maybe you could check you some of my poems??thanx!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

hey this poem you wrote very excellent,
you put your feelings in it and its really good

~ lovely poem, heartfelt
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Ok. I envy your talent! You are a great poet and I love all your poems I just chose this one to say it cuz I donnu> just a random poem I chose. Anyways keep it up cuz u rock. Thxs for commenting on my sucky poem. Hope to talk to ya in the near future!

DANG!!!!!!! that was amazing! im so jealous fracisco, u really are amazing! your writing, just wow. ive cried when ive read many of them, bc they are beautiful, sad, and just because they are amazing! you are so talented!!! much love
lia jnell

Aww, this is incredible, I loved it, especially the last line. Keep it up!

AWWWW