awww, this is so good, excellent work on this one, ! ! Thanks for ur latest comments they mean the world.... !

I thought that was really amazing work you got there and ur reaslly talented..keep up ur work and thank you so mucj for all your comments..i really appreciate it..=)
*XoX Sw33ti3*

The recent earthquake was terrible and your poem really shows it justice and you express the things that have happened there extremely well. Its a very good poem and i hope soon there will be better things to write about.

Really good poem! :) Happy new year!

...wow

i think all poems like this that respect the ones lost deserve a 5 plus its beautifully written

wow good poem luv how u described the waves as mad and drunk that was really kool
plz read my poem about the tsunami....
Trust in Him
&
Tsunami disaster

luv ya xoxox