very good, well written imaginative oem, welll done you two.

This is very cool. I am glad to see people working together in literature! It adds alot to what you read when two minds put one thing together.

Beautiful poem.

great poem.. loved it.. i liked this part "hopes and heart aches, rest on a blade,Memories start to fade,
Confusing what's here, and what's lost,
To numb the pain, but at what cost?"
(hope u have time to comment on my poems=P)