Immortaly you

by Lucy   Dec 31, 2004


Inside your soul, is so much hate
no need for control, its just too late
intense drama and passion, I'm still numb as all hell
I'm totally crazy, labeled by minds of the "well"
until i am able, to be me and be loved
ill never be happy, nothings ever enough
your blood soaked t-shirt, too much for you to wear
give it to me, your burdens, ill bare
ill take all your sad, through excruciating pain
just cause i do this, does that make me insane?
i don't want you to frown, one more day of your life
i want you to be fulfilled, ill take up your knife
instead of you weeping, ill swallow your sad
ill escape my own drama, like i always have
i love you so much, that i cease to exist
I'm immortally you, inside of this
the world Ive created, brought me to my death
as soon as your troubled, i hold every breathe
if your hungry, i am too, i indeed feel the ache
if your sad, i cry too, and pray for your sake
i can handle pain, i can handle bloodshed
i want to carry your burdens and make sure that your fed
my soul is so famished as you stay gone
with needles in kneecaps, i cant go on long
with these burning eyes and skin so damn pale
i mourn and i moan, you've been beaten so well
and i sit and i watch you try to get out of your hell
but you just go no where, you've become way too frail
immortally you, that's what Ive become
so far from me, that I'm virtually numb
i cant feel my toes, and i have no problems
I'm immortally you, escaping you're gun...

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  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    This is seriously good! Theres so much passion and expression in it, its just wonderful, keep it up, you have great talent xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Luke

    you are such a good poet. this was beyond a 5, this was like an 8 out of 5. im serious, i cant describe how good of a read that was. i love the style and the message, as well as the rhyme scheme. keep up the excellent work!