am i that bad?

no you're not bad at all yolande you are awsome!!!

Very good poem. I thought it was well written, and the message was excellent. Great job!!

Being completely honest, that REALLY is the best poem I've read on this site so far. I just don't see how anyone hasn't voted on it much. I absolutely love it though. Awesome job!! I'd give it the highest rating anytime. Take care!
-Conner

wow that was really good, i love the dark/sadness feeling that you have caputured in the readers mind. it makes me think alot about things when reading it, i love it, eachtime when i read it i get a different feeling. and there has only been a few poems that have been able to do that to me and that poem was a ver good one, keep up the good work.