hey that's really good. you keep changing your name on me here. lol. i can't keep up w/ u. anyways, great job!

nice poem, very deep. u wrote the poem as it was a real story.
keep up the great work, later
trueheart

Hey heather the poem is good, real good. The vision scary. But I've thought the same things too. It's strange... I remember sitting outside staring at this tree in my back yard and i swear every time i look at it i hear screams and i close my eyes in fear but then i see similar images of what you depicted in your poem. That tree still creeps me out today. Love yah bye

sorry but i have to tell u this, remember that poem how i wrote about classmate turning into a friend, then best friend etc... well like i told u before, he's only a best friend, not a boyfriend honestly, we are best friends period.

This is amazing! I love it Heather! aww thanks for what you said in your profile about me I'm glad I can make you smile! lol I understand this is how you feel when you try and help people and how all these people are crying for you! I'm amazed how you can handle all of this you're like SuperWoman or something. . . yes you have strength to carry the woes of others but you can always find someone to take care of your troubles too! remember I'm always here! I love you so much!!!

Love always and forever, Taylor

Hey gurl, Wow this is so great, the description, the rhyme, just so amazing, When I read I can actually picture it:o(..This is just awesome..Two thumbs up!! And keep on writting okays!
Shannon

i like this one i cant read all of your poems through but this one is pretty good

keep writin and kep ur head up

wow that was a really well-written poem and I think you did an awesome job..your stuff is great..keep it up!!!

GIRL I REALLY THINK THAT YOU SHOULD GET SOME HELP BEFORE YOU DO SOMETHING YOU REGRET.I KNOW THAT I MAY NOT KNOW WHATS GOING ON WITH YOU IN YOUR LIFE OR WHAT YOU GO THROUGH.BUT I CAN TELL YOU THAT BY THE WAY YOU THINK AND THE THINGS YOU DO TO YOURSELF ARE TERRIBLE. AND I MAY NOT KOW YOU EITHER BUT I DO CARE, OR I WOULDNT TAKE MY TIME TO WRITE YOU THIS. PLEASE GET HELP.

Deep..And kind of distrubing..

Chris

wow i love it i love it loll hehhehe
great poem im goin to check out all off them anyways c yaaa
peace(¯`v´¯)