Ok I can't keep it to myself anymore.... I love your writing, no matter what it is, but recently it seems that you have been persuaded to write nothing but erotica. You are very good at it but i think there is alot more you could write that would just put that to shame! I'm not saying give up the erotica, but write other things too. I love your work so much and you know that. So please don't take this the wrong way.

good work, I liked it a lot, hope you had as much fun doing/writting it as I did reading it =) keep good ones coming~

WOW THAT'S JUST AWESOME! I GOTTA CHECK OUT SOME OF YOUR OTHER ONES! YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER, KEEP WRITING MORE LIKE THIS! :)

Thanks Aaron, I know what you mean but ever since I started writing the erotica my other stuff has been getting downvoted and people have been saying they dont like it. Ill mix it up and write both though. Thanks to everyone else who commented too. Loves, K

great poem!

wheres part 2?

great poem...very detailed!!keep it coming...

Its a 1 part poem, but it does end with the....'s

damn grl!! keep wrtting..-luv ~Irina

The reason the erotica is voted better is because there are alot of ppl who want to sit at their computer and get off.... I am a strong supporter of your other work and you know i have voted and commented accordingly.... please keep writing things like you used to!
Thanks, Aaron

I know Aaron, your sweet. Thats how it is I guess... Ill do some other ones.

good, as always

Like corn on the cob,\'\' <--- thats from 36mafia