i liked it a lot. there were a few gramatical errors; check some of the spelling and sentence structure, i think itd sound better. But the poem itself deserves a 5/5.

great job, next time try to make the verses all have the same amount of lines. Still, it was a great poem, very emotional. 5/5

Exellent! It is very sad though but loved reading it! Check out mine if u would and let me know what u think! Thanx

wow this poem was really great, u did a wonderful job writtin it, great job!!

hejsan! ja tycke om den! very very good poem, it had a cool structure!
SatuzKa

Wow, very good poem well done again, keep up the good work
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absolutely beautiful and very touching, great job 5/5

smiles, hugs and love, Angela

on the whoel a good poem....i liked it....very touching indeed

"White as snow on a winter day
my smile slowly fade away"
Those were two very powerful lines; nice simile "white as snow on a winter day" ... but could it be 'winters'? I'm not quite sure...
But nice poem, I liked the non-structure sense it has; it seems like it's been written without thought; it seems to have not been forced.
Well done!

It's a good poem. Really touching...
So sad... I liked it!

One small thing..."You and I were mend to be" I assume you mean "meant"? Other than that I liked it very much, your expression is excellent in all of your work.

This was an ok poem the rythming was abit off and you need to revise a few words but the message was heart felt it just needs abit more work good try...

First of all I think mend was suppose to be meant. Ithink I commented on it before and the snow this was abit too redundant for me it just seem to linger on the that thought halted any flow it had. A bit of revision and this would be a very good poem...