I really liked this one! Yes, I, too, fret and pout when I don't get my way. =\ lol. We're human I guess, but that's no excuse. Anyway, great poem!

The language is kind of evasive, here. That's good because it kind of keeps the meaning a secret, of course, you've said what it's supposed to mean anyway, and now I'm rambling. Good job!

~Ciao Lipton

Thats soo good..ur soo talented and i love ur work ..imma add u on ma fave list if thats ok..keep it up cuz i wanna read more from u..and thx for ur comment on my poem and ur comfort..
*XoX Sw33ti3*

a very profound poem excellent

Omg, what an amazing poem, you really are so talented! I really liked it and thanks for sharing! Excellent writting and two thumbs up!
Continue to write:o)
Shannon

awesome work wit this one hun .. i loved it and very much enjoyed every bit ... ! THANKS FOR UR LATEST COMMENT but id love for u to check out my latest poem I added yesterday it would mean alot .. THANKS HUN and take care and cant wait to read mroe from u

awesome poem, the third and fourth stanzas especially, its a little confusing, but that makes the poem better... nice work!

Great one man..Seriously...Loved it!

Chris