Hey darling, this is good. Just some spelling mistakes....lol. I love it! Especially the last stanza. lol. I love you!
Keep up the good work, dear,
xoxZoexox

you saw that so you dont make that same mistake, it troubled you so much, imagine what it would do to the people who love you, keep writing. please

i luved this poem of yourz... soo gr8!!! keep it up!!!

this poem reallt touched me inside.your great i writing poems i read all of yours they r amazing 4 real

wow this is so powerful and wonderful i love it xxxxxxxxx

Wow that would have been a terrible thing to see! U wrote that with good emotion. Another great poem u have alot of talent! Keep writing!