I love the way

This is an extremely cute little poem.. i love it soooo much! great job.. the only thing i would have you change is in lines five and six.. make it so that it fits the pattern of the rest of the poem.. but it is really good
keep up the good work
take care of you
amanda

I really enjoyed this poem, its very created, and expresses alot of feeling, its very well written, and i personally really like it! but i was wondering if maybe you could comment and or vote on my new poem called "White Silk Dress" if its not too much trouble! Thanks, sarah jenkins!

I feel the same way about my boyfriend so I can relate..It was a different poem form than I am used to but i liked it..Take Care ~Jasmine~