Wow that was good. I can't really think of any criticism... I, uh... Well I'm glad this poem was written.

A very beautiful poem. Very well written. lol

critically astounding

Wow...Very Good Poem! I liked it alot:) Keep it up! *5/5*...

~!~Sedusha ~!~

Nice! I really like this one... although the rhyme scheme is oddly absent, and at times I lost focus, I really enjoyed reading that. At some parts it was a bit confusing and choppy, too... but overall it was great.