Another excellant peice; the imagery is amazing

wow...again!
Absolutly beautiful. The astounding words were put into place so perfectly, it jsut impacted me in a deep way. The way you just pull out words and form them together is something gifted. again, the symbolism is fantastic, and I absolutly admired the stance,
"Through furs and flesh this primordial assassin
Maws indomitably spiteful until even shivers
And farewell whispers are naught but frozen epithets
To the haunting glories of heart-fire and possibility."
So much incredible use of text and symbolism that create such a dramatic effect and leave the reader wanting more. Fantastic job

Beautiful poem.

AMAZING PIECE OF POETRY! You are an incredible poet; keep up the astounding work!

Tres Bien, Mon amie! (in french)

*mon ami

Excellent job, I loved it! =D

I LOVE so many words you use in this poem. Excellent write. >3jess

OH MY,
what a beautifully written poem. Dont get upset lol but, reading this made me think of edgar allan poe...because your use of visual aspects within a dark prespective contrast between you and mr.poe....dude, if you can make me {the mind who wonders off into la la land} think of poe when reading your work {mabey its just me}...WOW...BRILLANT...LOVED IT your going on my favorites mister.
Take care always Mr.Miles
scooby

You created such a desperate craving! And your words call out to be caressed with admiration.

Another simply amazing poem, the use of the cold/the landsacpe as a creature/entity is most excellent and adds a great deal to this peice. although there is no rhyme to this poem the flow created by the words you used made it flow just as easily as if there was a strict one and makes this poem all the better. 5/5
~jacob

Wow this poem gave me the shivers now my hands are cold and its like a 100 degrees.
When i can feel your poem, it means your doin a good job. Keep up the good work.

High praise! Thank you.