You've commented on my poems so thort id check urs out :-) this is amazing poem!! i loved it!! so full of emotion as well! never stop writin cos uv obviousy got such a talent! we need more poets like u hun xxxx

beautiful poem, jescelle! sorry i havent been on recently. things have gotten worse. my parents found some of the poems i have been writing and i am now attending a private christian school. the change is okay i guess but i found out that some people will actually miss me over at my old school. but i wont be on here as often anymore b/c my new teacher for computer class wont let me get on as much as my other did. i miss talking to you! damn, i can barely walk! i have bruises all over my upper legs. there not as bad but they hurt so much! i gotta go now (teacher). bye! **hugs**

aww hun dats really beautiful. well written and just great!
keep up da fantastic work,
luv u always,
ellie

trhanks babe!

trhanks babe!

Hey Sweetheart,
THat was a beautiful poem. ANd of course I'd check out you're stuff! :-d It was written very well, and I really enjoyed it. Ima go read some more now! And, I'm incredibly sorry about your dad. I know what it'sl ike not to have one. If you ever need anything just get at me on AIM... seyxdani54 (it's not spelled like that, but they would'nt let me put s*x on here)

Anyway, I hope you check out more of my poems. I'm going to try n' read all of yours.

heya hun thanks so much for commenting on my poems you asked if in the poem learn the meaning of the word trust if it was the same guy as in the i want one just to say it wernt it was a friend who did something then denied it to all my other friends thanx for ure comment and this is a really great poem love tasha x x

your welcome tasha!

Wow. Liked it. One of the best ones I've read.

thanks hunnie