Unfortunately due to my immaturity, I wasn't able to read the rest of your poem properly after the second line.

You have accidently put 'Welk' instead of 'Walk' in the second line, which was much to my amusement.

But It's a lovely poem none the less. Well done :) Take Care.

I thought this was an exceptionally beautiful poem. And one day I hope you find the woman of your dreams. She exists, just look and you find her. Great job! Enjoyed! lol

Good poem. I know its hard to believe, but there are actually women like that out there and Im guessing she'll come along when you least expect it. Good luck, keep up the great work.

i hope i can be the woman.....hehe

i love you,
your girlfriend,
Heather