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Hi Rachel!
Great poem, I gave you a 5 for this one.. please check out my poem "dry your eyes" It would mean so much to me.. Hugs

i love this poem!

that was another one of you fabulous poems!! keep it up!!

WOW beautiful and great flow with the words

AMAZING POEM! WOW! keep it up!
xxxxxxx

Oh wow..such a beautiful poem..so sad...i felt like crying...
Beautiful poem..well written..good joB..
-sarah