wow great poem..... i really felt how you were feeling it came accross great your poem flowed really well and its very creative great work!

awsume poem keep it up

I liked this one to ur good
good luck with ur poetry
even though u dont need it
lol

Damn ur good e mail me sometime
i would love to talk to u.check out my newest poems u might like them.
fireofdarkness89@yahoo.ca
good luck
hope i get to talk to u

This poem is great you should really do somhing with these!!

Exc ellent job
great use of words

Dis is such a great poem!!!u need to keep writing!!