Great poem hun, I loved it...very *can't think of word...* It's great though, I understand what you mean...I hate school...Amazing hun, as always...love you...Take a break every now and then hun, don't want you to get brain damage from thinking too hard <33 xxxxx love u

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

thank you again and again i love you so much, please dont take my sunshine away

ur poem is sooo gr8!! iloved it!! gr8 poem gurl...and keep it up!!

Lol You really put it all together well. Awesome in all it's awesomeness.

thank you for your comments, everyone, sarah l costello, I fixed what you saw, and sorry, but if you didn't notice the whole poem only the 2nd and 4th stanzas rhymed.. thanks again

ohh, sorry i misread your comment i though it said that that was the only one that rhymed, and for that i couldn't think of a rhyme for sure that would fit what i wanted so i went with true. if you have something that would work feel free to suggest it

These essays and test

Just a thought, but I feel that the first line would read better if it said 'These essays and tests.

Good Poem Though.

Nici.

always true and always great poems logan...keep up the good work !!