You've definetely got some great flow to it; easy to read without any lines seeming cluttered or too long.
I would suggest more length, but then, this poem is unique for its length and its structure. So, well done. An excellent poem.

this is really great! i really do love it! i can relate so easily and i can imagine everything keep it up!

Love, Taylor

very depressing yet i do know the feeling, i hope you find love again! May God Bless U
Love Heather